To the Outlaw of Blind Dates… MY SCRIPT PLACED

Happy May 1st!

I woke this morning to some really great news. My short script, To the Outlaw of Blind Dates, earned a third place in MoviePoet.com’s April contest.

The premise behind this short five-page script is:   When two people meet in a park, their first impressions change as they get to know each other. 

I joined the  MoviePoet community in 2008. In a previous contest I earned an “honorable mention” but this is the first time I’ve placed. I can’t begin to tell you how happy I am because there are many accomplished writers at MoviePoet.com.

MoviePoet.com is a great place to hang out if you want to learn how to write a screenplay. The site is loaded with writers who care about helping aspiring writers hone their craft. The monthly challenges offer writers a place to try new things.

In my case, a comedy.

Usually most people think I have a kind of warped sense of humor.

I can’t believe I wrote something that people thought was funny.

For the Love of Books…

Life of a Writer: A Writer’s “Free Time”

So busy…. so busy…

I truly believe that if one is serious about writing there is NEVER any free time. Because if a serious writer has “free time” it is spent writing. So, by definition, writer’s have no free time.

This has been a busy week. I entered the current contest at MoviePoet.  The challenge this month was to write a short script (5 pages or less) with only have two characters. The characters  must not have met, talked, or written each other before they meet. There were 34 entries and, when I enter these contests, I commit to reviewing the other entries. So, I’ve been doing that. I consider reviewing other writer’s work as part of my writing because I always learn from the task at hand.

I am up to page 30 on the ANGEL’S KISS, DEVIL’S MARK screenplay. This story is the sequel to my novel and screenplay titled WINDFALLMy initial plan was to write the companion novel to go with the screenplay but I’m starting to falter on that plan. The story will make a good film but I am not convinced it will make a decent novel.

Most of my writing time has been spent on FINDING VERITY,  my current novel. Word count is almost 64,000 words and I am really loving this project. My goal is to have the first draft completed by June 1!

When the first draft is finished, I’ll be looking for “first readers.” If you’re interested, please send me an email!

A Few Words on Characters…

As a novel or screenplay is written, writers need to be aware of their characters.

Duh…

No, really, give it some thought.

All stories have a protagonist and an antagonist so, as a minimum, stories have two characters. A story can be written with only two characters but, usually, there are more than two.

Many more.

Usually characters are human but sometimes they are not.

A character could be an animal, like the shark in JAWS or the pig in BABE.

Some characters are make believe such as vampires and zombies, Porky Pig, or Superman.

Weather has been used as an antagonist. Two good examples are hurricanes and tornadoes.

Even inanimate objects have been used as characters. Remember the strange car in Stephen King’s CHRISTINE, or the toys in the TOY STORY franchise?

One thing I learned from publishing my novel, WINDFALL, was to be cognizant of how many characters I introduce at any given time in the story. If too many characters are introduced at one time, the reader can’t keep them straight.

Try to introduce characters one at a time. This gives the reader time to get to know them. If this is not impossible, introduce characters in small groups.

One way to help readers remember characters is to differentiate them. The writer does this by making each and every main character come alive on paper.

If your characters are important to the story, give them a name and, if possible, make the name memorable. Give them physical attributes that are impossible to ignore, and habits that stand out, or an occupation that is so unusual it will never be forgotten.

But, if a character is secondary, such as a doorman or cab driver who only appears once in the story, don’t give them a name. In fact, don’t tell us they have fire red hair and weigh as much as an elephant. We don’t want to remember secondary characters. If a reader notices the secondary characters, the reader is distracted from the main characters. Writers should make secondary characters almost invisible.

So how many characters are too many? There is no answer to that question. Some stories only need two characters. Other stories will have hundreds. Just make sure your main characters are memorable because that makes it easier for the reader to remember them.