Books are Classical, Screenplays are Rock ‘n Roll!

How many times have you heard, “Yeah, I saw the movie but the book was  better…”   Or, “Yeah, I read the book but the movie was better…”

I’ve always been an avid reader.   When I was twelve I spent many afternoons in the library, choosing Perry Mason books to keep me company over the next week.   That translates to over four decades of reading!

I’ve only written screenplays for a couple years.

I have decided that comparing the two is like trying to compare classical music to rock ‘n roll.  They’re the same… but different.

Bach and Beethoven wrote music.  So did the Beatles, Elvis Presley, the Grateful Dead, etc.  You can compare them.  Yes!  Are they the same?   Sure, because both use notes and melodies, rhythm, etc.   But, despite the fact that they are the same, they are very  different.    Some similarities.   But very unique.

The same thing can be said for books and screenplays.    Both involve words, writing, and stories.   But, as similar as they are, they are very different.  A book TELLS us a story.  A screenplay is a blueprint for SHOWING a story.

For example, let’s take a murderer as he plans his next crime…

In a novel the author might  get inside the character’s head, letting us know exactly what the murderer is thinking.  But in a screenplay, unless the writer uses  a “voiceover”, the viewer only sees what is on the screen.   We see him make a list of what he needs to pull off the crime but we can’t see the thoughts that define his anger.

And this is why the movie is so  different from the book.  Or why the book is different from the movie.

I still read a lot of novels.   But, these days, as I read, I find myself  taking a scene and trying to figure out how I’d write it for a movie. 

The goal is the same … tell a story.    A novelist or screenwriter both use words to tell the story.  But they are different.

Books are like classical music.  Screenplays are like rock ‘n roll!

Why Do I Maintain this Site?

Why do I maintain this site? 

I was asked this a few days ago.  Good question.  Thought provoking.

Some people thought I created it to “get noticed”.  Couldn’t be further from the truth but, if that happens, as long as I “get noticed” in a good way then so be it…

Is the site’s purpose to “showcase” my work.  Yes, but that truly is not the main reason I spend time doing this.

No, the purpose of this blog is simply to “record” my journey.    In 2007 I started to learn how to write a screenplay.  Like most aspiring screenwriters, I was sure my first SP would be a great success.   Ha!  I couldn’t have been further from the truth.

Over the last three years, I have learned that, while  writing screenplays is a journey, getting the screenplay produced is also a journey.

Computers and digital cameras have impacted the process of getting features produced.  More aspiring filmmakers can enter this competitive arena.  The recent movie “Paranormal Activity” is a good example.

So, I’m recording my personal journey.   I do not use the word “journey” lightly.  This endeavor will take time, lots of it.   It will be a journey!

But I have time.  As mentioned somewhere, someplace, my goal is to have  a feature made by the year 2036.  That’s the year I’ll turn 85!

Feed Your Screenwriting Passion?

Every day, I feed my screenwriting passion!  Nine times out of ten I write but not always…

Other things I might do include …

Create and update IDEA files!    Consider files for titles and loglines.  One file that I update on a regular basis is my “what if” file.    I have found that maintaining idea files keeps me focused on my current project.  If I get an idea and don’t write it down, the idea sits there and festers, distracting me from the “project at hand”. 

Read SCREENPLAYS:  When you read a screenplay, you learn.  Yes, you can read succesful scripts.  But you can also read scripts from aspiring screenwriters and provide help in the form of a “review”.  These reviews will accomplish two things…  You will learn,  and the writer will learn.  There are several on-line sites that are great for this type of exchange.  Three that I visit are  MoviePoet.com, Zoetrope, and TriggerStreet.

Read WRITING BOOKS!   This seems like an “obvious” to me but there are many writers out there that have read one book and then don’t read any more.  I’ve found that, as I read books about screenwriting or story development,  my brain generates ideas that are helpful to projects I’m writing… 

Outline story ideas!  Your future projects!  Your outline can be detailed or very general.   But write it down, and save it for a “rainy day”.

Develop Characters:   Do you have ideas for characters?   Create and maintain a  “character” file.   Then, when you need a really special character, you’ll have a bunch of notes to peruse.  You might keep lists of character traits, dress, hobbies and habits.  Or you might flesh out specific characters. 

Visit Libraries or Book Stores!  A great resource for any writer.

Dream!  Close your eyes and allow your thoughts to drift.  Before you fall asleep, acknowledge the ideas that are starting to develop.  Watch the movie you are writing in your head.   Focus on a plot problem and find ways to solve the problem.

Don’t tell me you don’t have time to write!  There are many ways to feed your screenwriting passion!  Just do it!

Someone Mentioned my Work… More Pics Uploaded!

Last year I entered the NYMCC screenplay championship contest.  I made it through three rounds but not the final round.  The contest was won by David Bowman (Redmond, WA).  I have never met David nor have I “talked” with him on-line.

Why do I mention this?  Because, in the “winner’s interview”,  David mentioned “Hux Hollow”, one of the stories that I entered in the contest.   This is the first time my name/screenplay has ever been mentioned like this by another screenwriter, and I can not begin to tell you how “honored” I felt.  So, anyway, congratulations to David and thanks for the nice words.    Click here to read David’s interview and here to read Hux Hollow.

The production of “Bart Vader” is still a “go”.  I told Margaret that, if she changed her mind, I’d certainly understand.  But she still wants to pursue this project and I think she’s going to do a really great job.  I can’t wait to see the finished project.  She’s been busy scouting down props and is planning to hold a casting call…

I uploaded some “behind the scene” pictures of the filming of “The Charl(Y)ie Factor” which is being made for the DVXUser competion.    Click here to see them.  I’m really proud of Rich (the filmmaker) because he has quit smoking in the middle of this project.  I quit smoking almost twenty years ago and I must tell you, it is one of the most difficult things I have ever done.  Even now, I occasionally get the “urge” for a smoke.

“The Screenplay” is doing very well…  I’m on page 43 and fast approaching the half-way mark!  The deadline for the MoviePoet “logline” contest is January 31st.  This is where I will enter the title and logline for “The Screenplay”.  I haven’t made any changes to my logline in over a week, so I guess it’s done.  The title never did change.  I wish I could write about “The Screenplay” here but I can’t…  It must remain anonymous. 

I finished reviewing all the shorts for MoviePoet’s “Third Time’s a Charm” contest…  a lot of variety this month.    I entered a short screenplay in this contest.  The winners will be revealed on February 1st and we’ll receive our feedback at that point.

Because I’m working full-time now, I find it difficult to keep up with all the opportunities that are on the internet.   For the past month, I have been absent from Zoetrope and Trigger Street.

In December, I rewrote “A Thousand Miles to Freedom”.  It is now titled “A Thing of Beauty” (no, I have not updated this site yet for the title change).    “A Thing of Beauty”is written from a different viewpoint than “A Thousand Miles to Freedom”.  It really is the same story, but it’s different.    I entered it in Script Savvy’s December contest and should be receiving feedback on that rewrite any day now…

Modern Day Concerns About Filmmaking…

As mentioned on an earlier post, my short film “Bart Vader” is going to be filmed by Margaret Ricke in Bagley Minnesota.  “Bart Vader” is a short script that is ideal for a student because it involves only ONE location and ONE actor and is only ONE page in length.

To quote Margaret, “This story is an homage to Star Wars, but it isn’t ABOUT Star Wars…  It’s about Bart.  It’s about a fragile man in an elderly body who still looks for the magic and miracles in life…  He relates to the anti-hero who becomes a hero.  At his age, he still indulges in modern mythology…  ”

There is a “Darth Vader” mask in the story and we’ve had concerns expressed by fellow writers that we just might get our butts sued by Lucas films because of the reference to Star Wars.  There is also a line at the end of the story where the old man says “This is CNN.”  Someone suggested we might get in trouble with CNN for using that line…

Because we are not going to make any money from this film, I don’t see a problem with making it.    As a writer, I don’t like to bother myself with these kind of details but, I think it sad that filmmakers must “cover their butts”.